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Monday, May 25, 2020

Returning to school writing

Talofa lava  reader's,today I am going to share my first draft of some writing I have done about returning to school.Our teacher's gave us some instructions to write about how we were felling about going back to school. I fell so good when I write things.My writing was about how
I felt  excited coming back to school to see my  teacher.Can you please give me some feedback?
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  1. AnonymousMay 26, 2020 at 12:46 PM

    Hi Mele I like your returning to school I really like the way you did the capital letters. I just know you put how you feel when you got to room 11 I felt like that too. maybe next time to add more feelings and about the school gate?

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  2. Mrs CassidyMay 26, 2020 at 8:18 PM

    Good evening Mele.
    I always enjoying seeing you in the morning.You are always so positive.Your friendly good mornings always fill my bucket.
    What have you enjoyed most about being back at school?.

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  3. Mrs CassidyJune 3, 2020 at 6:52 PM

    Hello Mele.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.

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  4. Mrs CassidyJune 9, 2020 at 6:34 PM

    Hello Mele.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I can't wait to see what other work you have been doing in class.Have a great week.

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  5. Mrs CassidyJune 22, 2020 at 7:01 PM

    Hello Mele.
    Just a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I look forward to seeing some more of the learning you have been doing in class soon.

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    1. AnonymousJune 29, 2020 at 11:16 AM

      Thank you Miss Cassidy for commenting on my blog. I will be posting some more work on my blog soon.

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