https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Vv-BfVoq4g
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, September 20, 2019
My Song Story
This is a story that I have been writing about. Our kind and caring teacher Mr Martyn told us to pick a song and writ about. But we are not allowed to copy the video. My song is called perfect here is the link to the song!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Vv-BfVoq4g
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Vv-BfVoq4g
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello Mele. I enjoyed reading your story.I remember helping you with some of this story.You have given the story a super ending.I like how Jacob taught the girl to ski.I would need someone to help me as I am sure I would fall over heaps.What do you like doing in the snow?
ReplyDeleteHello Mele. I enjoyed reading your story.
ReplyDeleteHi Tiffany and thank you for commenting on my blog and how are your family doing and how are doing today at school
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