I chose this video because I liked the pet that the girl had. I wish I had one. I would name it Cutie-Pie.It would be blue.
The girl was sitting on the couch and she was patting her pet.She was happy.She went outside and
she saw a blue light.
she saw a blue light.
Her boss called her she turned her phone off.She saw china words written on a building.
The street lights were on.
The street lights were on.
She went outside.Her boss called her again and she threw her phone. She was mad because
her boss kept calling her.
her boss kept calling her.
She ran inside the house and packed her things.She put clothes in the bag.She was feeling sad.
She ran out of the house.She got on the elevator.She was going to her motorbike.
She got on her motorbike and she dropped her bag.She dropped her bag in the city.She was feeling
happy.
happy.
She turned her ring on and a bubble came up.The bubble was big and blue.She went into the bubble.
The bubble got her and her pet.She is dreaming.She was sitting by a lake.
Hey Mary,
ReplyDeleteIt is me Krystallynna. What a amazing story you have writin. I really love the picture it is beautiful! I loved how you said she was happy. Because when you said happy it reminds me of you being happy at school! Next time you could add spaces between the fullstop and the letters. I have a question how long did this story took you? Well bye now Mary see you on friday bestie!
hi mele wot your pet ?
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