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Wednesday, July 29, 2020

Opening sentence for my story

Hello reader's today I am going to show you about my story that I have been working on for this year because we are having a competition in our school if one of the class's get the most comment wins a free early play time and  a free party. So our  parents get's to comment on our blog's. So can you please give me some feedback please. Bye see you next time.

2 comments:

  1. Hello Mele.
    I enjoy commenting on children's blogs as I get to see their wonderful learning.I don't know if the comments I leave go towards the tally.
    I wish you all the best with winning.I hope you get lots of people checking out all the fantastic work you have done.

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    1. Thank you Mrs Cassidy for commenting on my blog and how was your day today?

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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.