Hello reader's today I am going to show you about my story that I have been working on for this year because we are having a competition in our school if one of the class's get the most comment wins a free early play time and a free party. So our parents get's to comment on our blog's. So can you please give me some feedback please. Bye see you next time.
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, July 29, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello Mele.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy commenting on children's blogs as I get to see their wonderful learning.I don't know if the comments I leave go towards the tally.
I wish you all the best with winning.I hope you get lots of people checking out all the fantastic work you have done.
Thank you Mrs Cassidy for commenting on my blog and how was your day today?
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