Good morning reader's today I am going to show you my writing that I have done over past two weeks and I have write about the present and it was pretty good and can you please can give me some feedback.
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, August 13, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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well mele the present story looks good i like your story and the word's use to discribe.
ReplyDeleteHi Tyrone thank you for commenting on my blog and how old are you and I that you got your own chromebook and I thought it was keri's because It look like keri's chromebook and I hope that you have a great afternoon. bye
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