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Wednesday, August 26, 2020

my show don't tell

Good morning reader's today I am posting a blog post and can you please give some feedback




One day I was going to the beach in a hot sunny day.It was nice going to the beach everyday and I was making sandcastle and I made another sandcastle and I end up making a big sandcastle and I cover myself with sand in the sandcastle and the water come and washed up my sandcastle.

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  1. Mrs CassidyAugust 27, 2020 at 9:47 PM

    I like how your story gave me a picture in my head Mele.I could almost feel the water lapping at my feet and the sun rays on my face.
    My grandparents lived in Kaka Point,which is very close to a beach.I used to love going down onto the sand and look through the rock pools for creatures that had been washed into the rock pools.
    Do you know the name of the beach that you went to?.

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