Good morning reader's welcome back to my blog post and today me and my class were drawing flower's at the afternoon and we chose what flower we want to draw and we all whose our flowers and we drew it and I pick a easy one and here is a photo of my flower. What could I do to Improve my drawing. have a good day reader's. bye
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, October 14, 2020
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Hello Mele.
ReplyDeleteI like the attempt that you have made to get your flower looking like the photo.I can see the middle looks like the photo.I like the 2 circles in the centre.
Maybe next time you could draw less petals and put a gap between each petal so that it resembles the flower you are drawing.
Keep up the great work.
Hi Mrs.Cassidy thank you for commenting on my blog and how was your Weekend?. My Weekend was good because I went to a sleepover with my coins
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