The present

 Good morning reader's today I am going to show you my writing that I have done over past two weeks and I have write about the present and it was pretty good and can you please can give me some feedback.

Opening sentence for my story

Hello reader's today I am going to show you about my story that I have been working on for this year because we are having a competition in our school if one of the class's get the most comment wins a free early play time and  a free party. So our  parents get's to comment on our blog's. So can you please give me some feedback please. Bye see you next time.

My team Algorithm dance

Hello reader's welcome back to my blog.So today's blog my class room 11 we have been to do Algorithm Dance. I'm super happy because I am not the dancer I have to say the word for the bot and my friend Ryan has to do the Programmer and I have to do the tester. And my friend Ryan is the dancer so BYE.can you please give us some feed back!

My Acrostic poem

We learnt about colour poems and Acrostic poems Acrostic are poems in witch the first letter of each line spells out a word or message about the topic. Can you please give me some feed back.

Returning to school writing

Talofa lava  reader's,today I am going to share my first draft of some writing I have done about returning to school.Our teacher's gave us some instructions to write about how we were felling about going back to school. I fell so good when I write things.My writing was about how
I felt  excited coming back to school to see my  teacher.Can you please give me some feedback?

Privet and personal

W,A,L,T know what information can be shared online and what to privet to help keep me safe online

All about me!

Hello my name is Mele .  I am a student at Hornby primary school.   I am a year 5 student and my classroom is room 11.  My favorite foods are sushi and banana. I also like playing with my brother and my baby brother.  I live with my mum, dad, two brothers and my nana. I grew up in Tonga. My is family mum,dad,brother and my little brother,sister,nana cousin. Thank you for reading my  blog post.       Thank you for reading my post.